Separation Agreement wording question

Without commenting on the overall validity of the agreement, those two changes would not affect the legality of the agreement.

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The separation agreement presented to my husband has two statements he wants reworded.

ORIGINAL: certain differences have arisen between them rendering it undesirable for them to continue to live together as Husband and Wife
REVISION: certain differences have arisen between them rendering it undesirable for Wife to continue to live with Husband

ORIGINAL: by reason whereof they separated on June 30, 2007, and have agreed to live separate and apart permanently
REVISION: by reason whereof Wife decided to separate on June 30, 2007, and has determined to live separate and apart permanently

Will these revisions affect the legality of the document?